Digging a hole in me

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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    Beyond my trees, hoping more,
    Wanting the empty space.

    The empty space, a hole in me,
    Digging into myself.

    Powerful forces, take in me,
    Take me out of my world.

    Feeling helpless, now I see,
    No one is here.

    No one has ever been here,
    To help with myself.

    My soul, my life, my reality,
    My hole, my darkness, my lie.

    Empty, just a hole in the earth,
    No one knows, no one cares.

    I am here, by myself,
    Wanting to runaway from the nothing.

    This black hole, is deepening,
    Don't make it worse, by diggin more.
     
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    heshboy

    heshboy Well-Known Member

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    Nice I am feeling it. Your poems are great.
    Are you going to enter the tourny, if they can put it together? B)
     
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    notneo

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    Its different and i like the way you've written it .
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    thanks for your comments !!
     

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