Verses one, two and three are rappidly sung, rapped as you would say, and the chorus is sung as usual. --------------------------- (Verse 1) I hear the rain fall Surrounding me, these rhythmic sounds Reigning over silence Reiteration lingers as it brings me A meaning I never saw As my life stalls Halting thoughts recreating Another world disintegrating And I watch as the time flies Dying away, taking everything along the ride Stuttering words just wisp away It’s all in the delay (Pre Chorus) Shake awake the lie that lives in me before I break away From the truth that binds me, unraveled chains, the pain Consumes as it locks away, degraded I’ll fade this way (Chorus) Stepping through, demise has fallen and I Never knew, entwined with words blessed with delayed Faith, a pain replayed, reoccurring as doors unopened saunter Revealing traces of a life as it merges through Sway away, unease has settled in, regaining all Remaining here, a single sorrow never sung as Life once lingered near, now replaced with a following silence As it fulfills this empty reticence, a hollowness inside (Verse 2) Yet winds flow And I watch as the air blows Stinging wounds, retracing lines behind Pain that just won’t seem to subside, but I Can’t turn around as walls buckle down Tearing me from unstable ground Grasping shards of a broken life Pieces with uneven heights, jagged sights Leave trailing marks as I cling to my only Source of balance, preposterous alliance With those who drive me away from my own assurance Of a fulfilled promise made from my own reliance Upon myself, a part I can’t hide to deny Crumbling beneath, wearing down what I felt I could survive Pre Chorus Chorus (Verse 3) And I Know my grip is slipping fast, unsheathed terror As it falters back, flickering loss now reveals Though it shudders past, a forsaken route now exposed Enclosed, a life I once held back But these days are numbered, slithering away through the hands Of lives unremembered, and it’s soon forgotten, So in questioning, I’ll take what I have left, but Ruins, scattered across the line displayed by time, has redefined An outline, redesigned As sacred lies now fill the eyes Of one who once stood undivided, but now stands without providing An answer, a light I need, but I can’t receive, so I’ll Savage every breath, its essence a part of me I’ll Cherish only those relentless, never leaving me I’ll Feel fear from trial, break all denial Spin another dial, release another smile To turn back another page to sway back another day Give back another time so I’ll find another line Breathe another life, so in return I’ll die another day To give myself away Pre Chorus Chorus x 2
Good?? YEAH RIGHT!! ITS ####### AWESOME! I'm dead serious, I'm in total love with the rap verses and it mostly flows very well. I also like the chorus. I could definatly see LP doing that song, actually I wish that was a song they wrote. If you ever have it made into a song, tell me, cause I would really like to hear it.
Wow! That is so awesome! It sounds like something the Mars Volta would write! Which is a good thing. Thats crazily good lyrics, almost too good... :chemist: