Determination Zero (rate)

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    altershot

    altershot New Member

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    I feel your breath, breathing down my neck
    I feel the air, cold and making me shiver
    I feel my life, it’s such a wreck
    There can be no replacement for a lonely and broken heart

    I’m so alone, like a stone inside of me
    Feeling the wind hit my face
    It rips the soul away
    Like sand paper on wood
    Wishing it would come back to me someday
    But the clouds over head
    Cover the sky and hail the rain
    And wash away the hope
    I fall to the floor
    Can’t cope with this life anymore
    And as I fade to dust and sand
    I hold out for a helping hand
    But there’s no one there to help me
    And I crumble away
    To ash and bone
    Just because I was so alone

    This can’t be true
    What did I do to deserve this fate?
    The loneliness has stuck and glued to my face
    How can this be a nightmare come true?

    I feel your stare, upon my frozen skin
    I feel the wind, blowing away my warmth
    I feel my life, it’s wearing thin
    There can be no replacement for a lonely and broken heart
    When my life’s torn apart

    I’m so cold, like my heart is a freezer
    Feeling the wind hit my face
    It rips the soul away
    Like sand paper on wood
    Wishing it could come back to me someday
    But the clouds in the sky
    Scream to me and shower the rain
    And wash away all my hope
    Determination zero, I fall to the floor
    Can’t cope with my life anymore
    And as I fade to dust and sand
    I hold out for your helping hand
    But there’s no one there to help me
    I need someone to save me from this fate
    But I crumble away
    You were too late
    To save me from all the hate
    I crumble away
    To ash and bone
    Just because I was so alone

    This can’t be true
    What did I do to deserve this fate?
    The loneliness has stuck and glued to my face
    How can this be a nightmare come true?

    Can I breathe again?
    Can I see again?
    Can I hear your voice again?
    The entire world crashing down around me
    I lose myself in a different place
    I held my hand for you to help me
    But you were too late
    You’ll always be too late
    This will always be my nightmare come true
     
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    Mark

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    that's great! i love the repetition in the first 4 lines.
     
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    altershot

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    Thx...hopefully me and my band will turn it into a song soon. If we can bothered to get off our ass'.
     

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