Death By Faith

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    The Doctor

    The Doctor I wear a fez now. Fez's are cool. LPA Super Member

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    This poem was written by my girlfriend Katrina and shes looking for comments on it. So here it is.

    House of the blind
    believe you will lose you soul
    lies wind and wind
    close your eyes you fool
    children beware the one you call father
    as you starve they will feast
    the world grieves
    creating wars through time
    lies threatened by reality
    sanity impossible
    for shame
    the caustic sting of hatred
    crippled by greed
    hypocrites
     
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    Ivana

    Ivana Extremely H! Vltg3

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    If somebody wrote such a song for me I'd be thrilled ^_^
    It's beatiful.
     
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    The Doctor

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    Well she didnt write it for me, but she wrote it. I may try to write music for it if she wants to keep it going.
     

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