This is what my drunken fucking mind has just come up with. "Damn Straight" Yeah, damn straight, I'm gonna fuck you over as much as you did me, 'Cause you don't deserve what I've got to give, Especially when I got told you were his, Damn straight, The blisters on my hands won't burst if... You've got so much more to give, And I, won't give you anything, To tell me, What you've got to say... You've got, so much more to give, And I, won't tell you anything, About me, What have you got to say? Yeah, damn straight, You're gonna cut yourself much worse than you cut me, 'Cause you don't deserve what I've got to give, Especially when I heard you said you don't wanna live, Damn straight, The blisters on my hands won't burst if... You've got so much more to give, And I, won't give you anything, To tell me, What you've got to say... You've got, so much more to give, And I, won't tell you anything, About me, What have you got to say? Don't give up oh baby, I heard you screaming in the shower, My God, you said you want me, Don't give up oh baby, I heard you screaming in the shower, Damn straight, you said you want me. You've got so much more to give, And I, won't give you anything, To tell me, What you've got to say... You've got, so much more to give, And I, won't tell you anything, About me, What have you got to say? The blisters on my hands won't burst if... You've got so much more to give, And I, won't give you anything, To tell me, What you've got to say... You've got, so much more to give, And I, won't tell you anything, About me, What have you got to say?
I agree with Hellflame. I can't decide if I like it or not, one thing I'm sure of is that there's a hell of a lot of commas. [Edit] It's starting to grow on me.
Thanks for the comments, even if I'm not completely sure what they meant. *Stares at Hellflame and St0f*
"Yeah, damn straight, I'm gonna fuck you over as much as you did me," At first I read that wrong XD but Damn straight I read everything else correct. You did use a lot of commas, but I like.