Cry For Salvation

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Cry For Salvation

    The fool he is, falls again,
    Can't understand the rift between this life,
    I don't see the life behind these eyes,
    Mistakes made that cost too much,
    The misanthropy and common disgust,
    Everything ruined again,

    I can't blame you for my mistakes,
    I can't feel like you would do,
    I want to run through burning skies,
    I want to stop the hurt,

    The life I claim, is worthless,
    And I stand and watch us drown,
    My tears fall under my liars crown,
    The decay in me that left too late,
    Feeling the trickling crimson hate,
    The poison drink,

    I can't blame you for my mistakes,
    I can't feel like you would do,
    I want to run through burning skies,
    I want to stop the hurt,

    My lord save me, I cry,
    Because this trepidation has to end,
    The rules of pain start to bend,
    It's all so cold in this sea,
    Scars unhealed breathe into me,
    It hurts so much,

    I can't blame you for my mistakes,
    I can't feel like you would do,
    I want to run through burning skies,
    I want to stop the hurt,

    My lord I cry to you now, stop this hurt,
    My lord I cry to you now, I die tonight.


    thoughts please....
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    This is good, me likes. Keep it up.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Ace work ;)

    This bit was my favourite though
    Awsome work, i really liked it.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Thumbs up. :thumbsup:
     

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