Crossroads

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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Crossroads

    I can’t stand another minute
    Deep inside this hole of mine
    I see your face in everyone
    I’m passing by
    I’m leaving everything
    My past and future far behind
    Just to see you in the crowd
    Save me tonight

    Crossroads now tell me
    I’m going alone
    Where are you taking me
    Far from my home
    Crossroads now tell me
    How far can I go
    Leaving behind
    Everything that I know

    You’re the one who makes me stay
    Awake in all those sleepless nights
    And you’re my sight
    When I’m completely blind
    I’m leaving everyone
    And even though it breaks me down
    I need to see you one more time
    Save me tonight

    Crossroads now tell me
    I need her tonight
    Don’t try to stop me
    I’m too weak to fight
    Crossroads now tell me
    Should I still go on
    Searching for someone
    I don’t even know
     
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    fallenangel

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    this one was pretty good too! your writing is really good! ;)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Agreed.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    great work. it had a nice flow, although i can't say it toucned me or i felt an extremely strong sense of power from it but neverless, a good poem/
     

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