Critique Needed

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    Omar

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    I have to turn in a project in a few days and since I've been off on holiday break, I don't want my teacher to think that I waited till the last minute and only put in a few hours on the project (which I did, so there's no point in playing the blame game now :p )

    Anywho, please only serious critiques, "that sucks" just doesn't help :lol:

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    Oh, and don't look at my other work, "that sucks" lol.
     
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    >CrazyLoco<

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    Really cool! It's a very good manipulation.
     
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    Friskey™

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    Reminds me of Lemony Snicket or something? Awesome!
     
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    Kæton

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    That's very beautiful and impressive, Omar. :)
     
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    Omar

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    I think the same about you :shifty:

    I mean.... thank you :lol:
     
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    Anthony.

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    That's so weird I like it :eek: !
     
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    LinkinJunior

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    I really love surreal art, and there's a lot of of things that pop in my head while viewing this graphic. :D
     
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    emmmers

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    That doesnt suck at all, I love it!

    So Mary Poppins-ish. :lol:
     
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    Atsuzen

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    :lol: That's awesome.



    Love the flying umbrellas =P
     
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    Syphon

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    Thats really good, i really like the colors used, and the guy on the earth is really awesome. the whole picture has a great feel to it.

    There is one thing that seems a little weird though, where the bird is touching the umbrella, i think it makes it look less "real", like it makes it look as if you did just chuck in on top, not like the other birds which look more like they are flying, i dunno if you get what i mean but anyways the pic is still really awesome.
     
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    Holiday

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    :eek: thats freaken awesome!!!
     
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    Omar

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    Yeah I know what you're saying, there's a slight line around the bird that diminishes the reality of it. Thanks for the comment though, I'll do my best to erase that part.

    And thank you to everyone for all the nice comments :D
    The umbrella man gives his deepest regards.
     
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    Danielle

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    Wow thats really really amazing! You must have a really great imagination to think of something like that! I wish I was that creative! ^_^
     
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    i love it! one critisism tho, the 2nd umbrella from the right hand side has the same problem as what has been said about the bird, there is a small white line around one of the edges.

    but apart from that cool!
     
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    Very cool , it gets me thinking when i look at it..
     
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    lpassailant

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    that sucks

    Kidding! Not bad...But it's like a picture I'd get from a phsyciatrist asking...what do you see here... But on the brightside i'm confused now! :lol: the actual drawing is pretty good...the hours I will keep awake at night now..well....
     
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    Melonman64

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    Thats Freaking Awesome!
    makes me think of... freedom?
     
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    Pinkin Lark

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    oh man Omar that is awesome!
     
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    peripeteia

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    this is awesome! i could never do manips properly.. :(

    on the other hand, just a random thought: maybe u ought to make sky dark purple or something..and put a moon somewhere above the globe to make it even more surreal. just my $0.02 worth. ^_^
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    it looks wierd but it's also really cool.
     

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