OK, so not only am I an artist, but also an aspiring musician/songwriter. I've been songwriting since I was 14, but looking back all my rough drafts have been too easy and simple and cringe-worthy even XD but I continue to do it in hopes of becoming an elite songwriter. I've been greatly improving, so I wanted to post my recent songwrite up here so I can get some comments (compliments are nice, and constructive criticism is greatly encouraged by me). I'm planning on making an EP later on in my life once I get some more instruments and a band, but I already know what a song would sound like when I write it, so that's why I have so many drafts. If I do make that EP, no doubt "Crimson" will be on it. So "Crimson" may have simple lyrics, but that's because I chose a simple theme. Check it out and let me know what you think of it guys please and thank you! Crimson [Verse I] I'm eating dust on the floor Just sitting by your door Clutching the heart you tore Close to my eyes Too weak and stunned to stand With paleness crawling in my head I can't believe we just deband Like fire with ice I hope they treat you right I hope they are as kind But with my love so tight I'm broken that you kept me behind [Chorus] Why am I feeling so low When you are feeling so high Why am I in the dark So you can be in the light I'm down with Crimson blood Ever since you followed the one I'm Crimson red and it can't be outdone [Verse II] Just like sludge upon the floor I fall down a couple more I still have a reason to fall for I'm still falling for you But this is a lie (am I in a dream) As you push me aside (for the one next to me) You went off behind (and as I fall) And left me to die (ohh) [Chorus] Why am I feeling so low When you are feeling so high Why am I in the dark So you can be in the light I'm down with Crimson blood Ever since you followed the one I'm Crimson red and it can't be outdone [Chorus (with either a choir/full band w/o lead singers)] Why am I feeling so low When you are feeling so high Why am I in the dark So you can be in the light I'm down with Crimson blood [Chorus (full band)] Why am I feeling so low When you are feeling so high Why am I in the dark So you can be in the light I'm down with Crimson blood Ever since you followed the one I'm Crimson red and it can't be outdone [Outro] Ooh, oh, mmm Ever since you followed the one I'm Crimson red and it can't be outdone