Corruption of the People(lyrics I wrote)

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    Serious Dave

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    Serious Dave, Dec 7, 2012



    Secrets have been spilled
    Leaders have been killed
    We were forced against our will
    Chaos is still.....
    Consuming us all

    WHY? Why did it come to this?
    WHY? Why do we have to die
    Hiding from the all seeing eye
    Our time has come, the end is nigh
     
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    Filip

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    Filip, Dec 8, 2012



    I like the first verse much more. Overall, great! :chuck:
     
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    RyRy, Dec 8, 2012



    I like it :) The first verse is much better written, but the second one is very interesting. Very cool stuff!
     
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    Serious Dave

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    Serious Dave, Dec 8, 2012



    Thanks guys :) I'm not that great at writing
     

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