Lost in a labyrinth Trying to get out Searching for a way out of this Waiting to be found Looking for a simple soul To give me the directions Not knowing there is no chance to leave Till I have learnt my lesson Glancing up around my prison No doors, windows, or holes Realizing that in life We all must play our roles Looking for a place to run There's nowhere left to turn Only looking behind I realize There is nothing left to learn Wondering why people act this way Like there is nothing wrong As though we all bear no scars As if we are all strong I feel like screaming out Beating at my chest Screaming loud and shouting now "Can we rest now?" "Can we rest?" Why can't I escape? Find no open doors Starting to lose my frantic hope I'm crying more and more Sobbing out loud as I Clutch and claw at the wall Please let me be set free I draw my breath and call My hope is waning, and my life I shut my eyes and cry I'm sorry for everything I've done But I don't want to die Beating at the glass walls That separate me from the world Watching as life crawls by Me without a word Knowing that there is no use To entertain foolish light I'm not going to leave here Everything's not going to be fine There's no one left to blame this on But myself and my immature soul I wanted to be the epitome of perfect Don't want anyone to see me fall I can't see for the tears Streaming down my cheeks Are preventing me from looking At my biased view of life Resigning myself to this silent prison My strength fading away Wishing I hadn't given in to temptation My mind is running away There is no end to this duet Between reality and my cell But the silent corner where I sit Marks the spot where my Angel fell
now this one is much much better than the last one! it flowed really well and was a good lenth too! i have to say, i think this is the best one i have seen from you yet! keep at it cause you're obviously doing great at this writing thing!