Cold December

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    Dedicated

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    "Cold December"

    So fucking grab your coat, I know you're walking out,
    Just to make sure you're not too cold, what's this all about?
    You said you'd tell me but never did, is it not how you want to live?
    Or is it just the fact you're bored?

    Thinking of this cold December,
    Not fun trying to remember,
    How it was just last year,
    Screaming just to make you hear me out.

    Ah...

    Just call it mass production of the hate inside your eyes,
    Just call it anything as long as it's a lie,
    So I'll leave it to you, but I hope you stay,
    Come on you might aswell, we'll be okay.

    Thinking of this cold December,
    Not fun trying to remember,
    How it was just last year,
    Screaming just to make you hear me out.

    So just call...
    I'm not the one you're hating,
    Just the one you were dating,
    So just call...
    I'm not the one you're loving,
    I'm just the guy you're shoving,
    Out!

    Thinking of this cold December,
    Not fun trying to remember,
    How it was just last year,
    Screaming just to make you hear me out.
    Thinking of this cold December,
    Not fun trying to remember,
    How it was just last year,
    Screaming just to make you hear me out.
     
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    Really reminds me of some of my lyrics called Cold Winter :lol:

    Really good man,keep it up :)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good stuff.
     
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    CHEAP RIP OFF ALEART

    LOL, joking, really great, i liked it, had a really good flow and none of the rhyming felt forced, great poem. ;) Keep it up.
     
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    El Muerto

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    this part is fucking awsome man
     
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    :lol:



    Thanks for all of the comments ^_^
     
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    CHEAP RIP OFF ALEART

    LOL, joking, really great, i liked it, had a really good flow and none of the rhyming felt forced, great poem. ;) Keep it up. [/b][/quote]
    Were you saying he ripped my lyrics off or I ripped his lyrics off? :lol:
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    That he was ripping off you, but now i think about it, mabye your ripping Dedicated off. Hmmm :hmm:
     
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    :lol:!!

    No one's ripping anyone off :lol:
     
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    That songs awesome. The best i think was the first verse.
     
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    Thanks :)
     

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