Closest song to me

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    LinkinTheory

    LinkinTheory Well-Known Member

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    I wrote this song just yesterday. It is the deepest song I have ever written, coming directly from my point of view. Don't even bother putting a score, i wasn't going for best writing/

    <div align=center>"Her"</div>

    Always on my mind
    Making me tiptoe a thin line
    Everything I do
    Makes me think of you.
    Everything I am
    Everything I could be
    Isn't the least bit worthy
    Why do I do this to myself?
    Hurt myself because of you.
    Without the pain, I'd probably
    Wouldn't know what to do.
    Why did you do it?
    Ignore me like that?
    Made me feel like ####
    Wishing I could get shot.
    If every girl
    Showed up at my door
    But not you
    I'd slam the door
    Just before
    Shooting myself through
    That's how I felt,
    That's how I feel
    No exaggeration
    The pain is real
    The day my whole world will shatter,
    Has already passed.
    Nothing seems to matter
    Can't do anything,
    It's like being in a full-body cast.
    But you showed me who I was
    I needed this because,
    My life was a mess.
    But now that's over,
    And I have a whole new life
    To discover.
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    This isn't really the end, but Part II is just made for her eyes. That's why it seems like an abrupt end. If I seem happy, it's an act, I've been doing it since the 5th grade. Not for this girl, that just started, but back then I had different reasons.
     
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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    That's great!
     
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    LinkinTheory

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    To tell you the truth, it has a special place in my heart. Sounds cheesy but it really does, becuase that's where it came from. I said I wasn't going to put on Part II, but I guess in spite of the number of replies. . .(Thanks a bunch you 14 people who saw this!) I will.

    I was serious about it
    If you still have douby
    I may not know what life's about
    But I still know what I had for you
    Was real,
    Why else would i feel
    The was I do
    When I got back home,
    I wanted to think about you
    To be alone
    You were everything I wanted
    Sarcastic, Funny
    Not greedy for money
    With a mood that was always sunny
    That first day
    I knew I was lost
    Knew what it would cost
    To open up
    For the first time to a girl
    I was so damn nervous,
    I though I would hurl.
    I wish I could have told you that day
    Maybe then you'd a felt the same way.
    Maybe then you'd feel the same way
    But I guess
    That now I have to say
    That this is the end
    I'll leave you alone
    To forget who I was
    To end up as a memory,
    Covered in fuzz
    And before I go
    I want you to know,
    I don't deserve you
    I deserve to be alone
    Where nothing good will ever be shown.
    And where the pain is doubled
    When everything's gone
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    It may sound weird, but then I am.
     
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    blackpanther626

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    hey that a really great poem i started to cry, you got some powerful words or something, really awsume job.
    *~*marissa*~*
     
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    LinkinTheory

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    Sorry, i didn't think too many would even comprehend it, it sounds weird, kinda like it's just essence, and no word play. Nothing to make it sound right, just there. I would say thanks for the comment, but then I'd be thanking you for crying, and well. . . you know.
     
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    Andrea

    Andrea best friends. LPA Addicted VIP

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    Wow, you are very talented.
    Great Job! :)
     
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    Alacrity

    Alacrity don't stop talking to me; i haven't been listening LPA Super Member

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    woah. im...speechless
     
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    LinkinTheory

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    Thanks guys. It really means a lot to me. I thought this one was going to be shot down. I mean, the writing I could have reworked, and made it sound better, but I left it. You guys really helped pull me out of a slump. I wrote that song in a depressed state three days ago. You guys made me feel a lot better. I'll owe ya one. If your ever in Indiana. . .
     

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