City of Exile

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    arT saveS

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    Broken men lie on cracked streets under gray skies
    Suffering through turmoil and distress
    A tragedy this is, yet so many pray for bliss
    Never giving up hope in a world of death

    Devout Christians out to save gods’ little children
    Not seeing the demons lurking beneath each blue eye
    Darkness craving weakness to take over happiness
    But the good always remains, planning ways to fight

    Mothers cry out in agony as their sons fight someone else’s battles
    And mothers weep as their babies are brought home in caskets
    Oh what fortune lies in citizens of our proud nation
    Death to a civilization that wishes death on others

    So many people say they wish they could live in America
    Clueless to where they end up…
    In this city of exile, this country of ignorance
    This home of the brave and the land of the proud

     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    NICE.

    I liked it. Different style of writting but i like it. It seems familiar some how but i can't think to what. Comapring America to a city of exile.
    BRILLIANT ;)

    and this part ROCKs
    it is just great and so true. Keep it up.
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you, this is one of my personal favorites. :)
     
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    fab! :D
     
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    Thank you. :)
     

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