Choking Hazard

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Heavy is the Louis, Apr 18, 2007.

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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    Go ahead, be who you are
    You insecure dying star
    Continue to wreak your havoc shamelessly
    I'll just watch you hopelessly
    Knowing that there's nothing I can do
    But just try to spare myself of this

    The offense you throw is wearing thin
    You terrible waste of space and skin
    I'm sick of you and your lack of regret
    It seems that you don't understand yet
    I know there's nothing that I can do
    Just try and spare me of this

    And there's nothing I can do
    I've done nothing to you
    You fail to realize your mistakes
    As I begin to shake, begin to shake
    And I just wish that I could stand
    But I'm alone without a helping hand
    Otherwise I'd point out your mistakes
    As I continue to shake, continue to shake

    And there's nothing that I can do.
    I'm lost in this line
    I'm just sick of you
    You horrific waste of time
    You horrific tragedy of mine

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    Comments appreciated. Also, please look at windmills and comment on that, please.
     
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    Arlene

    Arlene Oh what tangled webs we weave LPA Super Member

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    That's really good, what style of music would this be in? I'm guessing rap by the rhyming? Very nice though. ^_^ Or is it a poem? Ugh now I feel stupid. lol.
     
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    Luke

    Luke Mind Your Manners. LPA Addicted VIP

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    Awesome work man, keep it up. :)
     

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