Childhood

I was standing at the window
watching the sun turning into rain
watching the children playin outside
and realize that I never had a childhood
suffering, pain, bleeding, fear and tears
were my toys instead of teddybear's
seeing people laugh makes me sick
it makes me sick to be such an empty person
Is that sickness a gift?
Or is it just the beginning of the journey?
The journey in we all have to fight
The journey in we all will die
The journey called Life!

 

That's good! 8/10

 

7/10 Pretty good though, did you check out mine?

 

Thank you!
No i haven't yet, but i will

 

8/10
i like it, its really good. You got a good visual thing going on.

 

Thank you!