Cheeeeeeesy, I know.

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    Harlz

    Harlz More Scared Of You Than You Are Of Me LPA Super Member

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    (i heard)
    Seize the day (A)
    Remember you are mortal (E, D)
    As i saw her, standing on her own (A, E, D)
    Couldn’t know, what it would bring tomorrow (A, E, Esus4)
    But just as sure, (A)
    I couldn’t let it go (D, Dsus4)

    So girl, stand on the edge with me (C#m, A)
    Face this candle to the wind (D, E)
    And I swear, (D)
    You’ll need never burn alone (G5, C*-D*)

    (and now)
    Neither here nor there (A)
    As long as im beside her (E, D)
    Let the world spin on and on (A, E, Esus4)
    Just make me know (A)
    That water won’t douse her at all (D, Dsus4)

    So girl, stand on the edge with me (C#m, A)
    Face this candle to the wind (D, E)
    And I swear, (D)
    It need never burn alone (G5, C*-D*)

    And i’ll do anything to keep her here tonight, (Bm, A)
    And i’ll do anything to keep her here tonight, (Bm, D-Dsus4)
    And I’ll say everything, til I find the words that are right (Bm, A, D, Asus4)
     
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    ScatterMatter

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    Dude, not cheesy.. well cheesy in a good good way if anything. I like it a lot, may be cause I can relate but it is very good. What are the things you put in parentheses at the end of each line though??
     
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    Rohit LP

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    ...???wat r dey..??
     
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    ScatterMatter

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    Doesn't look like he's too active anymore o.o I think they are piano notes, or some sort of notes.
     
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    Rohit LP

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    sounds like some unknown language to me.. :p
     
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    Harlz

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    Sorry guys, ummm yeah they're just guitar chords :)
     
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    Ah, makes sense, good lyrics!, bet it's a good song too.
     
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    Harlz

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    The idea was to write it 'for' my girlfriend, for our 1 year anniversary. But I chickened out, I'm really really shy about people hearing my lyrics...
     
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    Rohit LP

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    its pretty wel written...xcpet d title mayb..
     
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    Harlz

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    haha the title's a joke :p

    Thank you dude :D
     
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    ScatterMatter

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    Dude, she'll eat it up even if it sux, and that rocks so.. 2 and 2 equals 4 :p
     
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    It's kinda cheesy in a way but it's a sweet cheesy song for sho!

    She'll love it in a gajillion times. :D
     

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