Check That Guys !!!

Hiii , GoodMorning !
i creat a crazy startin[Intro] for The song _ Somewhere I Belong _ so i put a new beats in the start and a sound effect !So i want you guys to check it and tell me , but im not professional in mixing i hoppe you like the idea that i made

download it from here :

http://www.sendspace.com/file/kp5oms

if some one wanna help me ill be so happy i mean, tellin what i can add and what i can remove.
Sorry for my bad english

 

I can't understand what your saying, but it sounds pretty cool, a little too long for my tastes, but pretty cool nonetheless

 

yeh far to long IMO

 

im sorry coz i dont speak anglish well , but i want to say that i maked a start music i mean introduction sound for Somewhere i belong ...that's all

i reduced the intro time , its 1.50min now and that's the best i can do
enjoy it.