Cathedrals That Shine Like Your Eyes We'll walk up and down Saint James Street Kicking stones on the sidewalk as we go In the bitter cold of the winter's air Your smile is like the sunrise to me We'll sit on the curb next to the post office Laughing and throwing objects at the passing cars Walking back up the street with the wind to our backs We sit and rest on the steps of the library And when you get cold, I'll hand you my jacket as well as my shoulder By now the stars are out in full display for us to see I tell you to pick one out and I'll bring it down for your own desire And with a slight chuckle, you put a smile upon my face Then when my watch hits ten and the moon is full We'll head back down Saint James Street milding chatting into the night Halfway between my house and yours, you'll place your hand into mine The street lights grin, illuminating the joy on our faces And when we reach your doorstep only your living room light is on I'll bring you in close, kissing you softly, for the very first time
I've always admired your different approach to writing and this is no exception. Great job Tim, I wonder who its for .
I like it, the ending is a nice way to tie it up lol. Like Andrea said, nice title, it is an eyecatcher lol