Catch My Breath

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    Boring, repetitious song but owell

    Catch My Breathe

    Look, I will not waste my time on trying to explain that everyone is not the same, they have different religions, hopes and dreams. Let me lay it out just this once without being so obscene, it seems - that every thing that you were taught has got you brainwashed and every thought that you have got is another insult to me and the rest of the world, who gives a fuck if we don't read the bible or the Quran, what's it matter if I take what I believe and keep it to myself, I don't really think there's a place called hell, but I'm not saying there's not I just want you to stop, stopping me on the corners and streets preaching to me as if I'm leaching off you, and every single thing I do is a crime, maybe it is in your eyes but not mine

    (I try to catch my breathe
    As you try to make me feel guilty
    For being who I am)

    Do you want me to be like you and put people down because you don't believe in the same things they do? I've a feeling it's true your shallowness is so cruel, and I demand that you get a clue and stop to look down at your shoes, they've been glued to the ground by way of my lyrics, and you'll soon start to fear it as it enters your brain and grasp hold onto your mind and starts to tear it and shatter loose, fool.

    (I'm holding onto my sanity
    I feel it starting to collapse)

    My nouns are like swords adjectives like latches that lock you up and shut the door of reality that you actually think is real, soon it'll be tragedy that grasp you and you'll see that I'll be on top whither you want me to or not, going to rot in the space that you call time and get soaked into the fabric that catches the batches of your moral ideals and the feelings you feel which you just can't conceal any longer, you're not getting any stronger, lower the selfishsteam because if you won't the verbs will fall in-between to make a scene out of your flesh and wet what you call your life when it's really the start of you death.

    (I try to catch my breathe
    As you try to make me feel guilty
    For being who I am)

    (I'm holding onto my sanity
    I feel it starting to collapse)

    Ha, yeah we’re telling them now, telling them how their bullshit is not what we want and if they think they are writers to make us believe in believing, there must be something that they just aren’t seeing, it’s not only them it’s to everyone that tries to get me to change, to those that throw the blame on you and ya just want to curse and spit of some harmful words, can’t ignore them, to those who hate your race and make decisions based on the gender you choose to like as if they were our god and could tell us what is wrong or right. Not this time, I attack with my raps and begin to sink their mouths that are so full of crap that every word spoken has it’s own skull, carrying the weight of arrogance, I laugh at the shit that they piss out and expect me to give a fuck or care about. By the way, I’m out.

    I'm holding onto my sanity
    I feel it starting to collapse
     
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    El Muerto

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    First of all:
    breathe, v.intr. = To inhale and exhale air, especially when naturally and freely
    breath, n. = The air inhaled and exhaled in respiration
    :)

    Overall, not bad. I like the third stanza the most. :)
     
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    The Emptiness Machine

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    Thanks for the correction, but yes as you can see in the thread title I knew it's suppose to be breath, just my word processor kept changing it to breathe and I got lazy and decided to post as is but thank you very much.
     

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