Um yeah, I've been writing this whenever I got an idea for it for the past couple days. I like constructive critisizm, so tell me what you think. And stuff. Here it goes: Well you tried too hard just to miss But don't put this down on your dark little list You've got ten thousand chances to hit So don't get distracted by wondering if They've got places for people like you And I'm not really sure but I'd say if I knew But this whole damn world hasn't a clue It's the freedom you choose that defines what you do So you've got your whole world in a box But you'd give it all up just to get what you want Now you're breaking down all that you've got You said, "Nobody cares so then why should I stop?" You dig deeper each time you give up If you can't understand it then you might be fucked If you loved it you threw it away It was a moment of truth gone as fast as it came But the lightning struck outside my room And the rain it came down not a moment too soon Now you let it all slip through your hands With that look on your face when the shit hit the fan It gets harder each time you forget That these deadbeat last words are as good as it gets And if you could ditch this date with hell I'm damn sure that I can forgive pretty well
Hey wow wow WOW WHOA! That was awesome! I'm sorry if this isn't constructive criticism, I just thought that was really good