Bruise

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Heavy is the Louis, May 6, 2007.

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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    Fight the bruise, you know you can't escape the game
    No matter what you say, no matter how you play
    Get used to the struggle, get used to the hand
    You've been dealt, nothing's going to go the way you planned
    It's useless; in this game you're gonna have to be ruthless
    There's no other way to possibly get through this
    There's no middle ground here between win or lose
    It's time to suck it up, it's time to fight the bruise

    Fight the bruise, you're not getting through it easy
    It doesn't matter whether or not you choose to believe me
    Feel through the space, you're in a rough spot
    Playing the game is the only chance you've got
    You've let your faithlessness come to deceive you
    You're find it unbelievably hard to make do
    All the plans you've made, they simply won't fly
    You can't get by in your cold disguise
    Your lies prevent you from seeing things for real
    You've forgotten it all, you've forgotten how to feel
    I have my doubts; in this game you'll lose
    Unless you figure it out, it's time to fight the bruise

    EDIT: Might as well make the point here. This is an incomplete work. I just wanted to put up what I had so far and see what people thought.
     
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    Luke

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    Louis, I really really like this. I do however feel that it seems rather incomplete. Great work though, keep it up. :)
     
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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    It's incomplete. It's just something that I wrote up while I was in class. It's not done. But this is what I have so far and I wanted to see what people thought.
     

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