Brokenheart Angel

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    The Doctor

    The Doctor I wear a fez now. Fez's are cool. LPA Super Member

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    Ok because I'm a cheesy boyfriend, I wrote this poem for my girlfriend Jess. I never wrote a poem before so it probably sucks. But here it is.

    You may see only darkness
    But within you I see light.
    Outside you may see ugly,
    But I see beauty that I know is right.
    I may be worlds away
    But when I see your face I know
    That distance doesnt matter
    When my heart feels your glow.
    Without you Id be lost,
    A shell without a soul.
    Living my life with you
    Is my one and only goal.
    You are my brokenheart angel,
    The reason I am here
    Our lives can only be better
    Once we're finally near.
    Words can not express
    The love I feel inside
    Though you may not be here,
    I feel you by my side.
    I need nothing else, I want nothing more
    Than to see you standing here, right at my door.
     
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    |CHRYSALIS of DEJECTION|

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    * applauds for one minute * 0_0 ..thats awesome man !!! beautiful !!! i'm sure she'd be proub of this !!!
     
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    The Doctor

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    Thanks! And yeah she liked it, it made her cry (in a happy way, I'm not a masochistic bastard)
     
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    Linja

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    Aw, but sweet, cheesy boyfriends are good. I think it's really sweet, and I'm glad that she liked it!
     
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    The Doctor

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    Me too!
     
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    Friskey™

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    Cheesy = Yes!
    Corny = Yes!
    Stupid = Oh hell yeah!

    But it was good, so i'm not going to bother with it :lol:
     
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    Seinfeld

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    It's awesome....and you say you've never written poems befor? óô
     

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