Broken Down Theres nothing to hope for in this Broken Down home My familys always screaming/Complaining I have no body/ And inside I feel so alone I feel the people I love separating/Painfully And I cant take it I take a breathe in my Broken Down world Falling over everybody/Stumbling This life is more than I can afford Im falling down/Tumbling Theres nothing to hope for in this Broken Down home My familys always screaming/Complaining I have no body/ And inside I feel so alone I feel the people I love separating/Painfully And I cant take it I have no fear but what to do next I feel myself doing everything wrong I can only try to do my best But Im Broken Down for way to long Theres nothing to hope for in this Broken Down home My familys always screaming/Complaining I have no body/ And inside I feel so alone I feel the people I love separating/Painfully And I cant take it Theres nothing to hope for in this Broken Down home My familys always screaming/Complaining I have no body/ And inside I feel so alone I feel the people I love separating/Painfully And I cant take it Everything in life comes with a price Everything I want is to big of a size To keep it all/I will have to fight (Broken Down)
Another good one You have a good talent Have you written loads of stuff but post it separately? WOAH! I use these () alot
Yeah, I'm also in a a band (Punk rock) called the "19th Act" It's a stupid name, I know, its just a temp. We have at least 20 good songs. (The ones i have been posting) and 40 bad songs. Some of the good ones (like Wake Me) I don't really like, but I do like One Day and Broken Down.
Yeah, I'm also in a a band (Punk rock) called the "19th Act" It's a stupid name, I know, its just a temp. We have at least 20 good songs. (The ones i have been posting) and 40 bad songs. Some of the good ones (like Wake Me) I don't really like, but I do like One Day and Broken Down. [/b][/quote] unless you guys come up w/ a better name, keep "19th Act". its a cool name. i bet ill see it on the front cover of a cd one day.
unless you guys come up w/ a better name, keep "19th Act". its a cool name. i bet ill see it on the front cover of a cd one day. [/b][/quote] Thanks, I hope I see it on a cover someday too.
Thanks, I hope I see it on a cover someday too. [/b][/quote] i like your lyrics cuz they have lots of details. you did a good job. its good to dwell on experiences for songs.
i like your lyrics cuz they have lots of details. you did a good job. its good to dwell on experiences for songs. [/b][/quote] Thank you, that means a lot.
WOW. this is a great song, i think u should push at this and try to become a professional song writer for bands
lol. Thanks for the compliment, but I write songs for my band. [/b][/quote] What's your band called? EDIT: 19th Act sorry
What's your band called? EDIT: 19th Act sorry [/b][/quote] LMAO!! Lol . Tis ok, my friend. We all make mistakes. I mean..everyone except me. :whistle: