BREATHLESS Inhale… Listen to the rain… Exhale… Each droplet has its own story to tell… Inhale… Each has suffered pain… Exhale… And each has been through hell… Inhale… I don’t know why life’s this way… Exhale… But it’s something we’ve to deal with… Inhale… Does it matter that I don’t know what to say? Exhale… If it doesn’t, then believe me, I won’t quit… Inhale… I’ve never felt this way before… Exhale… And you told me you haven’t either… Inhale… I don’t know what to do anymore… Exhale… All my friends tell me to go for you and “keep her…” Inhale… But how can I do that… Exhale… When I’m too shy to even say “hello?” Inhale… It’s like I’m in some kind of trap… Exhale… Like some sorry, angry fellow… Inhale… But what I feel for you—it’s got to be real… Exhale… And whether or not you feel the same… Inhale… Doesn’t matter because it’s helped me heal… Exhale… Each time I’ve heard your name… Inhale… Slowly, I build my confidence… Exhale… Slowly, I build my self-esteem… Inhale… I’ll break down this stupid fence… Exhale… With a full head of steam… Inhale… I want you more than anything I’ve ever wanted… Exhale… But I don’t know that you feel the same… Inhale… And that thought is what keeps me taunted… Exhale… When I think I’ve lost the game… Inhale… But when I think of your sweet face… Exhale… And your emerald-green eyes… Inhale… I quickly pick up that pace… Exhale… And breathe because I’m alive… Inhale… You’re all I’ve got to keep me here… Exhale… You’re all I’ve got to keep me from going insane… Inhale… Because you lead me from my fears… Exhale… And keep me pushing in the game… Inhale… It’s something I want to win… Exhale… I fell for you the moment I saw you… Inhale… Your beauty—where do I begin? Exhale… But your personality shone through… Inhale… You may not think I show it… Exhale… Or that I even care… Inhale… But I’m just scared to blow it… Exhale… And lose you in the air… Inhale… I’m not going to give up though… Exhale… And I’ll care for you forever and always… Inhale… I love you more than you’ll ever know… Exhale… Even in the darkest days… Inhale… But through this all, there’s one thing I’ve noticed… Exhale… You’re completely real and selfless… Inhale… And through it all you’ve shown this… Exhale… And when all’s said and done, you leave me Breathless…
I'm really glad you put this up Will, its a great way to show how you're feeling. There's nothing I can say about the actual quality of this except: "wow" But as for the hidden meanings, you can sort this out. Like you said, you're slowly building your confidence and you'll soon be able to accomplish these things that you weren't able to before. If you want something hard enough, you'll get it
*wipes a tear* Beautiful. Just beautiful. Hmm now that Brianna seems to probably be leaving Lee soon..I wonder if I should put my song up for the world to see..
I pop in sometimes. Err, im dumb then. It could be turned into a Dry Cell song, and would sound like Brave.
Will, i think u should become a songwriter when ur older, u would make millions, just reading this made me 'breathless'
*Hugs Will back * I'm hoping that all this works out for you mate, and you know I'm here if you need to vent Keep the writing up mate, some good stuff here (And there's your comment )