Blinded and Falling

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Matt, Feb 1, 2006.

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    Matt Official Ghost of the LPA LPA Super Member

    Aug 24, 2003
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    I just felt the need to write something, so I'm literally making this up as I go. I really need to just empty my mind right now.

    Once again I've fallen down
    Taken a hit I didn't deserve
    Is there a broken light in here?
    Because I still see nothing
    Behold, another troubled mind
    Bitten again by loneliness
    Crushed, suffocated
    Lost, destroyed
    Another endless winding path
    That all will take
    But few will keep following
    It is paved with hopes
    And then crumbled by fear
    And here is another monster
    A beast holding us down
    We're in a cage
    A cage in which we all shall suffer
    For no sins
    Cast in a lake of fire
    The agony wins
    Just when I know how to unlock the cage
    Just when I am sure of the solution
    When all will be well in this world again
    When we will no longer destroy ourselves
    It slips away
    How have I forgotten this thought
    Like a shepherd turns away for a second
    And turns around to discover his sheep are missing?
    Just one more chance
    Time is scarce now
    I haven't the strength to go on
    I reach out
    My fingers graze it
    The key
    The solution
    The opening
    The weakness
    ...and then I wake up

    Wow. I just let my mind run off into another world. Oh well. Questions, Comments, Suggestions, Donations?

    And yes, I'm aware that my sig completely destroys the mood. :lol:
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    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

    Nov 28, 2004
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    *donates donuts/doughnuts* It sounds like your mind ran off and you were left behind to scribble what it was thinking, in a very good way ^_^
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    esaul17 antichrist

    Jun 17, 2004
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    Good job. It does seem to lack a bit of pre-planning, but that seems to make it all the better.

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