Bleeding Transparent.

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    <div align=center>[​IMG]

    WINTER’S RAIN

    As I watched you walk away on that blisteringly cold day
    I wondered to myself if I would ever see your face again
    And as you disappeared into the murky fog over the hill
    Thoughts of you just filled my mind until I left for home
    When I arrived home I sat down on my front stoop
    And I looked above to the clouds fluttering in the sky
    Then I saw you in the heavens so high above me
    And I knew that I had to have you in my arms right there
    So I thought long and hard about what I had to say
    And I was prepared to deliver them to you but then
    I realized that I had no idea where you were at, so I sat still
    Because I knew that I would forever now be alone
    Now it pains me because I never made that move
    So now all I think about is how I want to die
    But I know that killing myself will not ever set me free
    Because my feelings for you are so real and I'm scared</div>
     
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    :D <~~~that's all *CONGRADUALATIONS* yeta nother ####### awsome piece of work Will
     
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    i thought it was supposed to be a happy ending.
     
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    A+. This is one of your shorter pieces but it definitely doesn't lack quality. Superb job, Will.
     
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    <div align=center>TONIGHT

    Lately, I’ve been wondering how real what I feel is
    And I’ve been trying to figure out what the deal is
    You seem to care about me at least a little bit
    Yet inside my heart I’m always throwing a fit
    It’s hard not knowing just how you feel about me
    Baby, I need you to come and set me free
    We won’t see each other for months now
    But I’ll be able to explain to you just how
    How to get by in this moment of separation
    But I know that all it is is desperation
    I need you in my life and that’s all there is to it
    But you can’t see that and I don’t know how to do it
    I have no idea what to say or when to say it
    Yet I’m not going to just make it up and fake it
    It has to be real and it has to be from the heart
    All I need to do is figure out where to start
    I need to be with you right now but I don’t know how
    I just need to figure out what to say right now
    Because before I can ever win you for me
    I need to figure out just how to breathe
    It’s time to wake up and separate feelings
    And prepare myself for my healing
    So I don’t fall into a breakdown
    And lose myself when I drown
    It seems that you’re not feeling the way I do
    So I’m wondering if that will change if I speak to you
    Because my feelings for you are way too real
    So beside my bed I am going to kneel
    I’ll ask the Lord for his assistance today
    That way I don’t mess up and cause a drastic change
    Maybe you’re hiding your feelings underneath
    While I look toward the heavens from so far beneath
    I grasp my blankets when I dream late at night
    Because even when my eyes are closed you’re in my sight
    Darkness can’t keep you away from me, no way
    But that doesn’t change the fact I don’t know what to say
    Though I’ll make it through the Summer all right
    I’ll just keep on dreaming of how I need you tonight
    I need you tonight
    I need you right now
    I know deep within your heart
    It doesn’t matter if it’s wrong or right
    I really need you tonight</div>
     
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    WOW. . . . AMAZING . . . . . . ~lost for words~ . . . . .
     
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    <div align=center>EVERYTHING.

    With every moment that passes me by
    I wonder where you’re at and what you’re doing
    And I wonder why I haven’t tried
    Because I don’t know who I’m fooling
    How can you ever see this is real
    If I never meet you face to face
    And how can I ever get a chance to heal
    When I never move into your space
    Someday I’ll find the strength to face you
    And I’ll be able to hold you tight
    Because then you’ll finally know the truth
    And you’ll know that this is so right
    There are some days when I can’t go on
    Then I think of you and I stop myself
    Because in my mind I am knowing
    That I can’t stay high upon the shelf
    I’ll remove myself from stock and check out
    I can feel myself begin to break away
    And I’m finally able to take one step out
    Upon a shooting start I will take you away
    We can escape the world with one trip
    And get away from all the hassles around us
    Because whenever I see you my insides flip
    And an aura of love slowly surrounds us
    It’s hard not being able to get what I want
    Because of this shyness that holds me back
    That everytime I see you it’s like a taunt
    And it reminds me of everything I lack
    Can you tell me what you really think of me
    You won’t hurt me if you tell me the truth
    I’ll be able to understand, it’s not a tragedy
    Even though it’ll mean I’ll never get you
    You are the energy in me
    That keeps me going
    You are the light I see
    That keeps me knowing
    That I can never give up my quest for you
    So I’ll stand here today beside your soul
    And I’ll prove my heart is true
    Because I have nowhere to go
    You’re all I want
    You’re all I need
    You’re everything
    Everything</div>
     
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    You are a true writer Will. wow!! I wish I could be like you...what do you do to come up with all these ideas?
     
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    I get in the mood and I just write how I feel.

    I'm surprised no one's noticed that almost all of my songs and poems are about the same thing.
     
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    I get in the mood and I just write how I feel.

    I'm surprised no one's noticed that almost all of my songs and poems are about the same thing. [/b][/quote]
    Is it because no one reads them? J/K.

    What do you keep writing about in all your songs and poems? ( I can't figure it out...)
     
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    Is it because no one reads them? J/K.

    What do you keep writing about in all your songs and poems? ( I can't figure it out...) [/b][/quote]
    Me neither . . . . ~thinks hard~ . . . . . . . . GOD, I CAN'T FIGURE IT OUT!!! AAAH!!~shrieks~
     
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    Jawknee

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    ::Applause:: :D

    Will, you're incredible. No one writes like you.
     
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    Thanks. :)

    I think the reason no one else writes like me is because no one else writes about the same thing 100 different ways and still manages to make it different from the one before. :lol:
     
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    WILLIAM...lol..I think you are writing about A. Death or B. a girl
     
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    He's writing about a girl...huh, Will? :shifty:
     
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    They are great Will!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D
     
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    everything is my fav one
     
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    Reminds me of the song "Everything" by LifeHouse.. Featured on SmallVille Soundtrack... But it's okay. Nothing really wrong. You're a great writer! My favorite is "Winter Rain"
     
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    Reminds me of the song "Everything" by LifeHouse.. Featured on SmallVille Soundtrack... But it's okay. Nothing really wrong. You're a great writer! My favorite is "Winter Rain" [/b][/quote]
    I know, I sampled that little bit of lyrics because it fit with what I was doing.

    Lifehouse is great. :)

    And thanks for your comments guys. :)
     
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    <div align=center>WITH BEST REGARDS

    Dear love
    Since that day when I saw you I've not been the same
    And everyday since then has been more than I can take
    One day I’ll be fine and laughing and joking
    And the next day I’ll be miserable, crying and broken
    But I know that in the end you’ll be there for me
    Because in my eyes you’re all I can see
    Though I wonder how real this all really is
    I know that you know what this feeling is
    I tell you all the time how much I care for you, love
    And how I feel like you were sent from above
    But sometimes I wonder if you understand me
    And I wonder if you've planned for me
    Because you seem scared sometimes but that's okay
    Some people tell me I'm crazy, #### what they say
    I know that what I feel is real and it's only for you
    And I'm going to prove that my heart is true
    It may not be today and it may not be tomorrow
    But soon with me away you will go
    I failed to reach out to you in the past
    But I'm hoping we can still make it last
    Because I love you and that's the damn truth
    And I don't know what more there is to prove
    So with this I leave upon you to feel
    With best regards - Will</div>
     

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