"Bleed The Blood Of Love" Look at these veins, they carry blood right from my heart, And into the gaping wounds you gave to me, I could say it's from my broken heart, But how much of a lie would that be? Sarcasm bleeding from these fucking cuts, Taking the piss from all the "if"s and "but"s, Replacing them with solid stares, God hasn't answered all our prayers. Why am I still bowing here cross in hand, I don't get it, I'm not a religious man, If Jesus could heal then I can, Get the gun let's test this man. Look at these lies, that are flowing through my veins, Replacing all of the oxygen, If only that truth can save me now, Why didn't I die way back then? Sarcasm bleeding from these fucking cuts, Taking the piss from all the "if"s and "but"s, Replacing them with solid stares, God hasn't answered all our prayers. Why am I still bowing here cross in hand, I don't get it, I'm not a religious man, If Jesus could heal then I can, Get the gun let's test this man, Why am I still bowing here cross in hand, I don't get it, I'm not a religious man, If Jesus could heal then I can, Get the gun let's test this man. Go fetch my morphine, This needle isn't clean, What a stupid dream, You're so fucking mean, Go fetch my morphine, This needle isn't clean, What a stupid dream, You're so fucking mean. Why am I still bowing here cross in hand, I don't get it, I'm not a religious man, If Jesus could heal then I can, Get the gun let's test this man, Why am I still bowing here cross in hand, I don't get it, I'm not a religious man, If Jesus could heal then I can, Get the gun let's test this man.
I like it. A lot. Could very well be the best I've seen. I normally don't like the whole repetition thing, but it's cool. Keep writing, it's amazing.
My thoughts exactly...which is why I like it But I think you can do better than the swearing, I just think it brings the quality of the lyrics down. Still very good. Me likie lots
i thought it was good, could have been better but i could imagin a flow to it, so good job. One thing though, the title reminds me of the line from DodgeBall, "No one makes me bleed my own blood, nobody!"
Is it me or are you getting better and better? I <3 this one. It's...rebellicious in some kind of way
That movie is funny "We here at GloboGym see obesity as a desease. Like baldness... or necrophilia..." And... Thanks alot for the comments @Marj, I may well be getting better and better
this line is terrible. the rest is pretty good, but i don't get the lesson. by the way, i know someone said this is going to piss off all the religious "nuts" and, it just makes me sad that you think you can compare yourself to the savior of so many people. try to clarify if that's not what you're trying to do and ill revoke my comment.
this line is terrible. the rest is pretty good, but i don't get the lesson. by the way, i know someone said this is going to piss off all the religious "nuts" and, it just makes me sad that you think you can compare yourself to the savior of so many people. try to clarify if that's not what you're trying to do and ill revoke my comment. [/b][/quote] Firstly, I agree with you about that line, it was more of a fill in for something else Secondly, I don't agree with everyone believeing in this one "super-god" that can do everything, because it's unrealistic. So, basically, the line in the song is my take on god and Jesus. I'm saying, if this guy can heal people, shouldn't I be able to? And, in the next line, I'm saying, how can we believe this stuff with no real evidence.
Firstly, I agree with you about that line, it was more of a fill in for something else Secondly, I don't agree with everyone believeing in this one "super-god" that can do everything, because it's unrealistic. So, basically, the line in the song is my take on god and Jesus. I'm saying, if this guy can heal people, shouldn't I be able to? And, in the next line, I'm saying, how can we believe this stuff with no real evidence. [/b][/quote] sorry to continue this argument about religion, i know it's annoying, but it's relevant to the song. anyway, perhaps jesus can heal because he understands that there are forces working through human beings that are not of this world, and cannot be explained through science. he understands that one must be sympathetic to his fellow man and love him. science has done a great job, but what makes us think that we can know everything? what makes us think we can become omnipotent? what makes us think we can become god? it's ignorance and selfishness. this is a great song, and i love you because you're a human being like any one of us, but having the idea you could heal a gun wound with conceded thoughts that you have the power to do so is not the smartest thing. and, i know this phrase is outdated and corny, but the proof of god's existence is all around us. through looking at my complex environment, looking at how it is so organized yet so incomprehensible, and looking at the people around me, i can see the proof of god's existance. how did this all come out of nothing? how did infinity emerge from zero? there's my proof for god. thanks for reading this. p.s. read my song "sleepwalking" or at least the explanation at the end of the song. the song is me thinking the same thing you are, but coming out with a less-arrogant conclusion.
Wow I really like this, definatly your best. I think the repitition works really well and the lyrics are just amazing.
In my opinion, Jesus could be just a doctor or psychologist, etc. He did what they did, heal and talk to people about their lives. Also, if god is infinite then he must have been around before he thought up the idea of having a world, but the idea of him didn't exist until humans were actually on earth, therefore he must have been "made up" in humans minds. Finally, people say that the "7 days" he made the world in wasn't really days; but billions of years... therefore proving that a supernatural being couldn't have made the earth, but it was made due to evolution.
In my opinion, Jesus could be just a doctor or psychologist, etc. He did what they did, heal and talk to people about their lives. Also, if god is infinite then he must have been around before he thought up the idea of having a world, but the idea of him didn't exist until humans were actually on earth, therefore he must have been "made up" in humans minds. Finally, people say that the "7 days" he made the world in wasn't really days; but billions of years... therefore proving that a supernatural being couldn't have made the earth, but it was made due to evolution. [/b][/quote] Epistemology This is a page explaining epistemology. It basically says that knowledge, especially scientific theories that cannot be proved, cannot be assumed to be true. How do you know it took billions of years to create the world? Did you see the creation of the world happen? Time is not permanent. You do not know how the world was created, and you ESPECIALLY do not know how long it took to create. You can't assume anything about that period. Plus, did you ever talk to the first humans? How do you know what they knew? The theories scientists give us are taken as knowledge from what we know, but we do cannot assume anything about something we didn't witness. The creation of basic existance of objects and entities has not been witnessed by any of us, nor anything like it. I know this means I cannot assume the existence of God (without faith) but you also cannot assume anything about the beginning of the world nor what the first humans knew.
Epistemology This is a page explaining epistemology. It basically says that knowledge, especially scientific theories that cannot be proved, cannot be assumed to be true. How do you know it took billions of years to create the world? Did you see the creation of the world happen? Time is not permanent. You do not know how the world was created, and you ESPECIALLY do not know how long it took to create. You can't assume anything about that period. Plus, did you ever talk to the first humans? How do you know what they knew? The theories scientists give us are taken as knowledge from what we know, but we do cannot assume anything about something we didn't witness. The creation of basic existance of objects and entities has not been witnessed by any of us, nor anything like it. I know this means I cannot assume the existence of God (without faith) but you also cannot assume anything about the beginning of the world nor what the first humans knew. [/b][/quote] Hey ya know what...I'm kind of a religious nut. The first time I read this it pissed me off a little. But I realize everyone can have their own opinions on God, and Sure, it's always worth trying to tell them about God and Jesus and whatnot, but if they want to have their own beliefs then so be it, I won't interefere. but I guess now I'm going to be labelled a horrible Christian who is denying Christ my work. to those of you who may be thinking this, WHATEVER!< Girly moment there, sorry.>But really, this is just how I work for now.
I think that we shouldn't argue about religious beliefs anymore, there's no point. No one is going to change anyone else's mind so let's just leave it to rest. Also, no matter what beliefs people have, you shouldn't disagree over them; that just causes racism which is not good Again, thank you all for the comments
that's not called racism. i'm not disagreeing with anyone because of their race. i'm just saying no one can assume what happened during the creation of the universe, nor how long it took. maybe you should straighten up your vocabulary before you argue using words you don't know. if your vocabulary is so small, i don't know why i'm reading your songs.
this line is terrible. the rest is pretty good, but i don't get the lesson. by the way, i know someone said this is going to piss off all the religious "nuts" and, it just makes me sad that you think you can compare yourself to the savior of so many people. try to clarify if that's not what you're trying to do and ill revoke my comment. [/b][/quote] ya. I am a christian...and i dont really like some of the lyrics but im not here to create a riot...its just what i believe in. but other than all that its an ok song.
that's not called racism. i'm not disagreeing with anyone because of their race. i'm just saying no one can assume what happened during the creation of the universe, nor how long it took. maybe you should straighten up your vocabulary before you argue using words you don't know. if your vocabulary is so small, i don't know why i'm reading your songs. [/b][/quote] I know it's not racism, but it can cause racism. And, I never said you were being racist... And I agree... if my vocabulary is so small, why are you reading my songs?