Bitter Knife

Closer and closer to the edge
I find myself,
And no rhyme or reason to my life.
I look to my heart and find it hardened
With the troubles I've come across.
No one listens to me anymore,
And no one could care less.
I scream and scream,
But it echoes back to me and I know
No one heard a peep.
All they hear is the pathetic whine
Of a teenager,
Oh what could she possibly know?
Well I know one thing,
The bitter knife is sharp,
And it will ease my pain.

 

I can definitely relate to that part.

...Actually I can relate to all of it.

Very good.

 

Thanks eh i think a lot of us can relate to it. I may have more coming on the way. Hormones help my muse.

 

Wow, what an awesome poem. I really liked the conclusion. Great job.

 

Wow, that was really good. Great ending!

 

thank you *bows*

 

Great poem. *insert jealousy here* Hehehe. Keep up the good work.

 

Wow! Awesome poem!