Okay, this took 4 and a half hours straight and I'm still not sure if I like it or not. I can't really decide what it is I don't like about it, but I tihnk it's the eyes. Anyway, here.
yes, the eyes, they are not balanced, one is bigger than the other. the mouth, not in dead centre nose, not in proportion for rest of face change them and it will be a good drawing