Beware the Soul Schemes run wild as dreams fall And to eternity still thoughts float Handfuls of regret for one and all With wisdom bound in your throat And into the cryptic dark of the soul Down past the hollow fog of our virtue Guileful Words corrupt and takes their toll While doubt and despair choke you Such a thing, corrupt will it be if let alone Hopelessly entangled by shadowy fiends But the seeds of redemption can still be sown If arrogance is silent, and sovereignty sings Beware the soul, for inside she sleeps Love can mend, but hate will consume Feeling the lost, hearing their weeps Into fire we are cast, are eternal tomb ________________________- I didnt like the way the first version went, liked the thought just not the exicution, thus i revmaped it to were I think it fits best, more of an Edger A. Poe style.