Believe Me Not

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Linja, Apr 14, 2005.

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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    All your love is now
    Forgotten
    All your sweetness has gone
    Rotten
    Believe me not
    I hope you rot
    I loved you but now I'm
    Forgotten

    You killed me inside
    Every time
    I had you close it was
    Sublime
    Believe me not
    I hope you rot
    I helped you but now I'm
    Forgotten

    So it's okay to turn
    Away from the one you adore
    So it's okay to burn
    I don't love you anymore

    I envied your fire
    Made me love you more
    It was you I desired
    But you shut the door

    The flame has gone out
    But I still remember
    I loved you, no doubt
    The fire, the embers

    Ruthless as you may
    Seem
    What is now is not a
    Dream
    Believe me not
    I hope you rot
    I loved you but now I'm
    Forgotten
     
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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    again this was really good.

    i loved this bit!
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    me too, tough sounds like it has a little bit of hidden obsession, but that's just my interpretation. i really enjoy reading your poems, please keep writing.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    i just loved the way you rhymed...beautilful! ;)
     

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