Please comment. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Behind this armor of sound: He sheds his armor so he can sink into her arms He sheds his integrity so he can sink right out of harm Well, He's set to contradict this world he's left behind again With a little bit of guilt 'cause he hates to follow trends Just so his feelings don't get the best of him, He will hide behind something profound And just so she doesn't catch the worst of him, He hides behind this armor of sound Now, He's on his hands and knees almost too weak to crawl back home But he's so close now, he's almost there...and he's on his own Well, She keeps asking him, "Darling, won't you come back to me? So I can help you become the man you've been dying to be?" Just so his feelings don't get the best of him, He will hide behind something profound And just so she doesn't catch the worst of him, He hides behind this armor of sound
I really like the chorus of this. he verses are kind of hit or miss in my opinion, but it is still a good piece! Out of curiosity, how many poems/lyrics have you written by now?
I have 49 fairly decent (imo) poems on deviantart...the rest is...well...to be honest, fucking horrible...you know...you read my first. Sucked ass, didn't it?