Before Your Time

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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Had a friend but he’s not here now
    All I’ve got is memories
    Rain is falling on my face now
    But it cannot hide my tears

    I pretend that I am fine
    But I’m bleeding deep inside

    And now you are gone
    Away for all the time
    You won’t be back
    You won’t be back
    And now I’m alone
    It feels like such a crime
    Before your time
    You’ve gone before your time

    Another casket waiting open
    For another friend of mine
    We all sit around and wonder
    Who’s it gonna be this time

    Life’s too short to waste a day
    I could be you it could be me

    And now you are gone
    Away for all the time
    You won’t be back
    You won’t be back
    And now I’m alone
    It feels like such a crime
    Before your time
    You’ve gone before your time

    And now I learned my best lesson
    You gotta live while you’re alive
    And now I see life is precious
    It’s sad it took you just to realize that

    And now I learned my best lesson
    You gotta live while you’re alive
    And now I see life is precious
    It took so much just to realize that
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Another great poem, i really liked this one, and i loved the message in it.
    Great work. Keep writing. ;)
     
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    El Muerto

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    thanks man :D
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Wow well done.
     
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    fallenangel

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    i love this one! it's a nice message in it and it flowed extremly well.

    almost brought a tear to my eye and your words have never been truer...

    so, so true...
     

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