This is one of the first songs I have written in awhile it's about child abuse from parents. I'm pretty happy with the way it has turned out but I wanna change the bridge. Anyways please give me some feed back and what you think of the song. ~~~ Back Off ~~~ +++Verse One+++ I've put up with your sh*t for way too long You think you're always right and I'm always wrong Your ignorance keeps you from listening to what I have to say It doesn't always have turn out this way This constant abuse is taking it's toll This anger inside is darkening my soul I'm gonna put it to end right here Gonna fight you back without fear +++Pre - Chorus+++ What if I had the power to control you Helpless like me nothing you can do Giving you words for you to cry on Brutal beatings for you to die on Coming home to a beast with bad intentions Bent out of shape with a parental suggestion Making up excuses for your bad habits You can't force my love, you're never gonna have it +++Chorus+++ Back off, and get away Hit you back Watch me snap [Just get away] Back off, and get away Hit you back Push you back [Just get away] Back off, and get away Hit you back Watch me snap Just get away!!! +++Verse 2+++ Heavy thoughts of you are in my head Bad memories of the past better left unsaid And even if they were gone, It wouldn't change you I Can't forget what all that you put me through Do you enjoy my suffering/humor in my pains Do you even care/or am I another one of your shames? Do you know what this anger is leading me to? Or are you a selfish illegitimate offspring of unmarried parents and all you think about is you +++Bridge+++ I just need you to back off And get away from me You need your space And so do I ++Chorus+++ Back off, and get away Hit you back Watch me snap [Just get away] Back off, and get away Hit you back Push you back [Just get away] Back off, and get away Hit you back Watch me snap Just get away!!! ++Pre - Chorus+++ What if I had the power to control you Helpless like me nothing you can do Giving you words for you to cry on Brutal beatings for you to die on Coming home to a beast with bad intentions Bent out of shape with a parental suggestion Making up excuses for your bad habits You can't force my love, you're never gonna have it +++Chorus+++ Back off, and get away Hit you back Watch me snap [Just get away] Back off, and get away Hit you back Push you back [Just get away] Back off, and get away Hit you back Watch me snap Just get away!!!
Hey, thanks for the reply on my song. I really like your song a lot. I have never been abused before, but this is the first song I've read that really shows your emotions. I never seen such strong words brought together in a beautiful song....nice work!
The bridge could be this: Just back off and get away, I dont want your abuse today i'll stop it now, i'll get you back, I see now, the strength you lack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ but i really like the song, 10/10! keep working, ur a grest writer!