As The Fake Snow Falls

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    Dedicated

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    Well, this is my Christmas song... Emo? Sure... But whatever :lol: I started writing this the other day and never finished it. So I did now because I've got nowt else to do :lol:

    Anyway, those of you who read it, please reply and give me some feedback on this :) And remember, feedback doesn't always have to be positive ;)

    Enjoy ^_^


    "As The Fake Snow Falls"

    It's almost that time again,
    The rooms are decorated, what a dream,
    Watch the fake snow fall, it's such a shame it's fake,
    But it's all good, let's make the most of it,
    You're here with me on this Christmas Eve,
    As the fake snow's falling...

    You don't know, how much, this means to me,
    You don't know, how much, I want this to be real...
    You don't know, how much, this means to me,
    You don't know, how much, I want this to be real...

    It's almost that time again,
    The rooms are decorated, what a dream,
    Watch the fake snow fall, it's such a shame it's fake,
    But it's all good, let's make the most of it,
    You're here with me on this Christmas Eve,
    As the fake snow's falling...

    You don't know, how much, this means to me,
    Sit in my arms, on my lap, on this old settee,
    Infront of the fire, move close to me, on this old settee,
    You don't know, how much, this means to me,
    You don't know, how much, I want this to be real...
    You don't know, how much, this means to me,
    You don't know, how much, I want this to be real...

    It's almost that time again,
    The rooms are decorated, what a dream,
    Watch the fake snow fall, it's such a shame it's fake,
    But it's all good, let's make the most of it,
    You're here with me on this Chrismas Day,
    As the fake snow's falling...

    I love just sitting here with you...
    I love the way you lick your lips...
    I love the way hands are warm...
    I love the everything about you...
    I love the fire crackling away in the distance,
    Or it seems far away when I'm with you...

    It's almost that time again,
    The rooms are decorated, what a dream,
    Watch the fake snow fall, it's such a shame it's fake,
    But it's all good, let's make the most of it,
    You're here with me on this Christmas Day,
    As the fake snow's falling...

    You don't know, how much, this means to me...
     
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    Jamie

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    That was terrible man..it sucks ass!!







    Or not...Its kicka ss man...
     
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    Andrea

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    Awwww, I like it. :thumbsup: :santa:
     
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    minuteforce

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    it's not that emo ... the first few parts seem a bit repetitive ...
    ... I'd give it a 2.5/5.
     
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    Dedicated

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    Okay, cool, thanks for the input ^_^
     
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    Alacrity

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    Yeah, it is a bit repetitive, but I LOVE
    I love just sitting here with you...
    I love the way you lick your lips...
    I love the way hands are warm...
    I love the everything about you...
    I love the fire crackling away in the distance,
    Or it seems far away when I'm with you...
    that part. it's so awesome.
     
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    Dedicated

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    Thanks ^_^
     

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