April 6, 2007

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    Rahat

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    April 6, 2007 in a dimly lit apartment Rahat and Yohan begin their conversation

    y: You know I really appreciate you commin'
    r: When I found out I dropped everythin and came runnin'
    i figured your guitar has started its strummin'
    and its just deaths tune that your lips start hummin'
    y: How could you possibly understand
    your so young and just barely a man
    you haven't lost a son...
    r: but I lost my best friend
    I've been here before its like a fucking trend
    death has walked by me once again
    takin my mind in circles and then...
    y: listen i understand where your head is
    its in the same spot that all of my dread is
    you see this isn't a story your tellin
    just part of my life I wish to be forgettin
    r: but you can't you gotta just let it start settin'
    move on but don't ever think about forgettin
    y: you speak wise words for a boy your age
    i can tell that you also share in my rage
    and know how i feel locked up in this cage
    and know theres so much greif in this blaze
    r: i'm sorry that i really can't do much more
    speakin to you is all i had come here for
    y: my son is now gone i hope you understand
    theres not much more you can tell this old man

    Three months later...

    i picked up the phone and what did i learn
    that you couldn't handle your lifes sudden turn
    and your wifes all alone while her insides just churn
    thats when i realized that on that night
    it was guilt and not grief that was cloudin up the light
    couldn't cope with the fact that you never held your child
    you were just hopin that feelin would be mild
    you ran off twice before and now your gone for good
    you ended the life of the coward that once stood
    in that apartment and told me that i don't understand
    but guess what i do you were never a man
    you left your son twice and now you left your wife
    with a knife in her heart thats filled with such strife
    you know i've heard its scary to bring a gun to your head
    but a true coward is the one who spilled out the red...
     
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    mcpancakes

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    reminds me of "Cat's in the Cradle" by Harry Chapin, the father not paying attention to his son. but anyways, very nice flow and rhyming.
     
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    Rahat

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    thanks for the comment this is based on a conversation i had with my best friends dad after my friend died and before his dad commited suicide
     
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    wow I mean its always interesting to hear the backstory of a song, sometimes you never learn the full meaning of it until you hear the story behind it. until you do, you can never fully appreciate the words. hearing where this came from, you can feel the pain of the family, and those who knew them. that last line just brings together all the feelings that the deaths have caused.
     
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    Rahat

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    yea just hopin you guys will keep them in your prayers they've been through a rough spot lately
     

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