There are days when you can’t seem to bring the knife to your wrist There are days when you still your breathing afraid that someone might hear you There are days when you feel that you might as well break down And cry There are nights when you think you could finish the entire bottle Just to get some sleep There are nights when your foolish worries from the past resurface And keep you awake There are nights when you want to lie down, close your eyes And cry The times when you wanted to forget all about it And cry The times when you tried so hard to summon the emotions And cry Why won’t the tears fall? You remember a time when all you had to do was open your mouth to form a word But you would break down And cry The years you waited for to pass by so that you could finally let go And cry The months you searched for the key to your mouth, so you can breathe in And cry The weeks you waited for news from the doctor as to why you cannot relax And cry The days you spent curled up tight clutching your pillow, trying to close your eyes And cry The hours you lay in a dreamless sleep, wanting nothing more than to wake up And cry The minutes you stared at your reflection, not blinking, hoping to falter And cry The seconds that were spent doing nothing at all, longing to fade away And cry You knew the minute it was over And the second he walked out the door That your tears had turned to dust Your heart to stone Your mind to ice And that your eyes had dried up Forever You would never have the privilege of being able to Relax Break down Let go Breathe in And cry You dream of crystal tears Flowing down rosy cheeks I was originally going to make this part one of two, but you tell me if I should make another.
i felt that the style of this one was quite original. i liked it! it's good to see you back torn rose. can't wait to read more of your stuff!
Thanks again for posting here as well. I'm just happy the evil one that posted on Shut Up and dissed everyone didn't reply here. To whoever replies next here, should I make a second part? I have some ideas, and it should be similar to this but diff. Ooh, did I go anywhere? I'm back. Only I never really left.
heyaa i can see your still writing one after the other lol your never taking a break--well thats good for us (readin more of your lyrics -- this one was good -i get the title "cry" now lol -yeh make a second part...- it'll be great ...i think lol it will probably be better than great anyways i'll always be waiting for your next one
GREAT, I havn't been posting for a while (been way to busy) and i can see you have really developed, this is amazing work. About the second part, well, do what you want, if you feel the second part in you go for it, but if you will have to force it and create something that may become a bit of a let down, then don't. Just keep writting, and keep posting.
Thanks everyone that posted. I 'aven't been posting for a while either now, well, about a week, because I haven't had internet access and 'm not sure when i'll next get it, so, thanks for posting, and i hope i'll have my next poem up about now. Keep it up you lot.