An Assortment of Sorts Volume II

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    Nick

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    A violent laugh, a silencing mockery
    unknown answer, hating teacher.
    Outcast by the voices controlling my heart
    Frozen until, the clock strikes two minutes.
    I've made an ass of myself
    So much.
    Reality hinders the stereotypes from me.
    I see myself now.
    The loser
    Hello.
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    We rarely see ourselves true
    An overcast of snow and slush
    Instead of blue.
    We hate ourselves for no reason
    Except of course, what we wish we'd done
    "I wish I'd been more fun."
    I say this far too often..
    Eternal forward momentum
    Only thing to do now, is smile and run
    Smile and run.
    Because we can't get what we want
    We can't live a dream.
    We only see what we see.
    and scream what we scream.
    So breathe.. Just breathe and live
    Today, I stand corrected.
    Just breathe
    Breathe and...
    Live.
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    I woke up with you in my head
    You and all the words we've said
    No one ever meant so much, to me.
    Remember when, we would sit and watch
    Lord of the rings
    And you'd laugh at the things
    That I
    Would say.

    With every smile of every day, you give me
    So much more than I could say
    So
    I won't say goodbye, no
    No this time
    I will stay around
    for you.
    So don't you close your eyes
    Everything's gonna be alright
    As long as you
    Allow
    them
    to
    When i'm next to you.
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    Take a wet stance
    The wind is the worst part.
    Part of this chance we are given.
    Repeating variables in the system.
    Oh again, you speak?
    Oh, again I flee..
    Take a number and add the lowest possible.
    Say a word followed by others.
    In the constant dance, our feet and backs grow tired.
    Lacking, but inspired.
    I can solve my life with the help of a friend
    But I cannot solve the numbers in the light of pretend.
    End.
    Start.
    Watching hearts fall apart.
    Stop, stare. Let them be.
    They'll learn
    Eventually.
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    Underneath words
    We live in reason
    Part of a seasonal demise,
    set apart from even's
    and odds.
    Call her like you miss it.
    Call her on the phone.
    Does once mean but again?
    Can second fall in line?
    As each has a spreading dream..
    We fall into the sky.
    The water's run dry.
    Only once, but bring her.
    The longest feeling, but he wants to say,
    I love you anyways.
    Oh god, I've set on my way.
    To her and drowning
    But... Maybe not.
    Maybe the lights will shine
    And surround this town.
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    El Muerto

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    It's pretty good, I especially like the penultimate part :thumbsup:
     
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    The what part?
     
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    El Muerto

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    The one before the last. I thought that was the word haha
     
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    Nick

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    I still don't see where you're talking about haha.
     
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    El Muerto

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    Hablas espanol? Sprichst du deutsch? Parlez vous francais? haha

    This part:

     
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    Nick

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    Oh okay well thanks haha. I still don't get the "penultimate" thing. :lol:
     
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    El Muerto

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    pe·nul·ti·mate
    adj.
    1. Next to last.
    "The author inadvertently reveals the murderer in the penultimate chapter"
     
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    Nick. I like this poem.
     
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    Nick

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    Thanks Jesse.

    Haha, wow Dusan, I've NEVER heard of that before, not even kidding. I thought it was like "The ultimate pen to write with" or some reference.
     
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    El Muerto

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    Yeah, that's what you get when you want to study English, you have to know all the shitty words that people almost never use :lol:
     
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    That's how my English classes are in High School but once we take the test over em, we usually forget about em.
     
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    I really enjoyed the first two sections.
     

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