Here's a poem I could never seem to figure out how to finish. C&C and suggestions are greatly appreciated and welcome. An Abrupt feeling Extended in the air, a sign I know it fades into the background as I move forward but I can not see what's behind me All I know is that sky has become a little more clear The clouds are thick and peaceful but through watery eyes they appear gloomy Trying to take in the beauty of everything I become lost in thought Alone or not I drenched covered in the feelings that over flow into familiarity And everything seems impossible It's as if the world is weighing me down while the universe is pulling me in a different direction They're so contradicting, these thoughts of mine
I like the imagery of how description was used. It does remind me of a sudden clarity, as if i were to suddenly stop in my ignorance and come to realization, yet somehow stubbornly refuse to believe while aos wanting to.