Alone

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    kobrakai

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    It's a little short and not that good... tell me what you think. :unsure:

    Alone

    I sing myself a lullaby
    So I can go to sleep
    And forget about you
    All those times we spent together
    When simply looking into your eyes
    Was enough to cease my pain
    And that one day you said you'd love me always
    As we danced together in the rain
    But just as the stars lose their place in the sky
    Your love for me was sure to die
    And now It seems to burn a hole inside of me
    These thoughts of you flood my mind
    You said we'd be together forever
    But now everything I dreamt I would be
    Is buried beneath my sorrow
    In the end it all adds up to nothing
    And I'm alone again
     
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    BroknSolace

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    wow, thats pretty good! great job
     
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    Andrea

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    Holy crap! That was very good. I really liked it a lot. It flowed together perfectly. Great job. :)
     

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