Alone I Will Wait

my blood drips from the wound,
as it falls to the ground,
i feel like im cucooned,
in a place with no sound,
and soon I'll break free,
runaway to my home,
be nothing but me,
in the dark waiting alone,

alone i will wait,
to the end of my days,
it seems like it's fate,
in all different way's,
I'll wait 'till you find me,
bring me back to life,
live with our sanity,
get rid of my knife,

living with scars,
from all my depression,
look up to the stars,
i have a confession,
for long have i loved you,
and now i don't know,
what this will come to,
but i feel really low,

alone i will wait,
to the end of my days,
it seems like it's fate,
in all different way's,
I'll wait 'till you find me,
bring me back to life,
live with our sanity,
get rid of my knife,

let me get to know you,
take a hold of my hand,
what i'm saying is true,
lets go walking in the sand,

alone i will wait,
to the end of my days,
it seems like it's fate,
in all different way's,
I'll wait 'till you find me,
bring me back to life,
live with our sanity,
get rid of my knife,

alone i will wait,
to the end of my days,
it seems like it's fate,
in all different way's,
I'll wait 'till you find me,
bring me back to life,
live with our sanity,
get rid of my knife,
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How do you like it? I made it in about 15 mins, and it's mostly true.

 

nice work...really and in fifteen mins...thats neat...i usually make mine in 20 minutes....hey! you broke my record!!! :angry:

 

its awesomeness 10/10. i love it. seriously.

 

yeah me too.


Wow did you seriously wrote that in 15 mins?! very neat, very neat.
I love it.

 

If you're going to produce a song like that.... it'a tad long.

 

Really cool, awesome, wonderful. I suggest maybe punctuation just to make it look nicer (also makes it easier to read).

Unfortuantly I've broken all your guys' records because I can write amazing songs in like 5 minutes