Writing: All Mother

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    Erica

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    The cool breeze passes through me
    The ancestors breathe into my soul
    I become the wind
    I become the driving snow
    I become the eagle
    Over snow capped mountains
    I will fly forever more
    I am of the trees
    I am of the river
    I am if the bear
    Mother of all, save my soul
    Take me away from it all
    For I am of the soil
    I am of the rain
    I am of the fish
    I am one with you
     
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    Gibs

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    Beautifully written. I'm going to assume this is about becoming one with nature. Colorado must be a beautiful place man. I haven't been out in the wilderness for quite a while.
     
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    Erica

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    Lol it really is a place that inspires stuff like this. I was at this place called hanging lake. Just this surreal small lake at the top of this steep hike. Its almost tropical like. But you're in this gorge so its all kind of contradictory. That mixed with some amazing music makes good inspiration.
     
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    Great poem. Describing the elegance of nature. Most of my poems are nature related.
     
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    Erica

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    Mine vary, depending on whats going on around me. Thanks as well :)
     
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    Pretty good. :)
     
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    Best I've heard from you yet, Pidg. Amazing!
     

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