Walking in a Dark Road all alone ... freezing wind huging me .... thinking about the Lonely world that i'm in it.. strange people staring at me, like they want to open my Dark Dairy of my self .... trying to get closer to these People but No one hearing my Silence Call inside of me .... My tears Runs on my face, the wind froze them ....so it bleeds my face .... Please anybody take my hand so i can wake up from this world i wont be Lonely in this world ... because i don't diserve this pain around of it ....
it's very cold, and the scene could be understood well, inspite of the short lenght, that's a good thing. but the situation was not all that well described. i guess it needs more explanation more depth, but hey! that's just me.