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Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Heavy is the Louis, Apr 8, 2007.

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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    What's the point of a contest when there will be no winner?
    Why hope for the chance of understanding when we're all called sinners?
    What reason have we to wreak havoc like this
    Over the hope of the absolution of everyone's sins?

    You absolve whatever you want
    The world has no more sins to commit
    Your so-called attempt at redress
    Has only agitated the conflict
    You've the population to point it all out for you
    But in this world, population doesn't stop the spilling of the blood

    If anyone is to pay for the gradual apocalypse you've summoned
    It won't be your people who've spilled their blood on your command
    Why do we fight when there's nothing to fight for?
    Make up what you want, but government is war.

    You believe in your Jesus and we'll believe in ours
    Force us otherwise is what you do for power
    You're losing your listeners, we're out of our desks

    True absolution is to absolve the world of you
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    very strong. a wide array of words chosen, great job! i swear, i had to re read a few lines to completely understand them. strength well manifested in your poem. keep it up!
     

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