A Woeful Path

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    Link04

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    This poem I wrote was inspired by the song "We Want the Youngblood" by Radiohead.


    And on he trudges
    And on he struggles
    Naked, faceless, formless
    Chained by his depravity
    Laboring for breathe
    Laboring for footsteps
    Laboring for Life.

    Until at last
    He trudges into bed
    And struggles to fall asleep
    Watch his mind wake

    And see a world
    Of faces flying and
    Bodies Leaping
    Spinning joy with no strings

    Snap.

    On he trudges
    And on he struggles
    Naked, faceless, formless
    And on he dies.
     
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    silver.flames13

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    I like it.
    \m/ :chaz:
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Well done.
     
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    Ivana

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    Great song ;)
     
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    :whistle:
     

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