A Song I Wrote

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Madias04x, Mar 31, 2003.

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    Madias04x

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    This is a song I wrote tonight about 12 am, which is why I called this song "Midnight". This basicly has to do with my ex girlfriend and how I gave her everything and she just threw it all away. I can sing pretty good, all I need is music for it. And this is also my first song, so you're gonna prolly think it's gonna suck. Give me a breka though, it was midnight when I wrote this....lol! :chemist:

    Midnight


    Consuming within are my thoughts
    Which feel so helpless
    Within my heart are deep secrets
    That no one's yet to see
    Wounds can be healed over time
    But what about the pain
    Just like gold or silver
    It bends so easily
    Once it's bent
    It won't be strait
    No matter how you try

    The pains there
    Can't you see it
    Why did you hurt me
    My heart was helpless
    Did you feel it
    You made it fall apart

    The memories are just this
    Being kept so far away
    My whole heart was all yours
    And you threw it all away
    Why do I feel so helpless
    When I think about the pain
    Just like gold or silver
    It bends so easily
    Once it's bent
    It won't be strait
    No matter how you try

    The pains there
    Can't you see it
    Why did you hurt me
    My heart was helpless
    Did you feel it
    You made it fall apart

    And yes
    I loved you
    And yes
    I held you
    And yes
    I needed you
    So why
    Did I trust you
    And why
    Did you betra me
    And why
    Is the pain still there

    I gave you
    All my trust
    Disbleife I feel
    My heart is gone
    Thank you
    You're the one at fault

    The pains there
    Can't you see it
    Why did you hurt me
    My heart was helpless
    Did you feel it
    You made it fall apart
     
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    Bryan

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    Please post in the right section, there is a whole Lyricists Forum for this stuff. Thanks.

    *moves*
     
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    Pretty damn good man

    Soory to hear about the break up
     
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    Hybrid Soldier

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    ya i can see that you have a lot of pain inside. sorry to hear.
     
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    Madias04x

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    Thanks for the support guys! And what's even more weird about all this is that it only took me 30 minutes to write this and come up witha tone for it.
     
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    Andrea

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    I really like the lyrics. You got talent.
     

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