Just Wrote this, can you please tell me what you think. A Dream Like You Spoken I dreamed of a night like this, a night of passion and beauty like no other. A dream world of joyful compassion and truth This is how it goes… Music starts to fade in Chorus Maybe tonight That lover could be, that lover, could be you. Stars burning bright, our passions burning high An eternal force, never to be fought Let it free to fly away as it will 5 Second Interval Verse 1 Our love set free, our passion burning high among the stars Our fate, our lives in the hands of forces we cannot control A night like no other, a night, a night in mid October. The leafs gently falling to the soles of our shoes The slow, slow walk home after a night of love and compassion Chorus Maybe tonight That lover could be, that lover, could be you. Stars burning bright, our passions burning high An eternal force, never to be fought Let it free to fly away as it will 5 Second Interval Verse 2 The key to my heart, in your hands, your will defines all The music to my heart, written by fate, you and myself Our melody, our passion in the waves of music and eternal balance Our lives, lived as one, our true dreams realised Our love, our passions as one, one which links all Your life, my truest most desire, my life long dream Chorus Maybe tonight That lover could be, that lover, could be you. Stars burning bright, our passions burning high An eternal force, never to be fought Let it free to fly away as it will Chorus Maybe tonight That lover could be, that lover, could be you. Stars burning bright, our passions burning high An eternal force, never to be fought Let it free to fly away as it will Verse 3 Somewhere deep in my heart, my deep feelings lie My true passions speak their mind, my dreams lie waiting My face could never lie, to you my dear I am only true Dreaming of a night with you, a night with us and the stars The millions of stars and planets, which watch our fate You are my fate, you are my obsession My only, one reason for living. 5 Second Interval Chorus Maybe tonight That lover could be, that lover, could be you. Stars burning bright, our passions burning high An eternal force, never to be fought Let it free to fly away as it will Fades Slowly Out Spoken You are my passion, my true fate, my existence By Michael James Kennedy Findlay
Pretty good, i couldn't quite catch the tune of it though. The only line that i didn't like was "a night in mid October." It just seemed really out of place, as if you put it there cause you couldn't think of anything else. Still a good job, keep it up.