"You inspired me to give up and just stop trying My last bit of hope left me here crying" I lay my head on the cold concrete and I Stare up at the moon lit sky I don't know why I can't sleep at night It's a mystery to even my self Maybe if I just sewed my eyes shut Believe everything is al right I could at least keep the tears from filling my eyes (Filling my eyes) I SCREAM Silently in my head I'VE NEVER FELT SO COLD (The tears I cry burn my face) My heart feels as if it has broken, But that's something I refuse to believe I know there's nothing there to break (NO HEART TO BREAK) The sidewalks move under my bare feet, But I've been standing in the same spot for hours The rain pours from the sky, But still in this place I remain, I'm set and ready with no where to go I've worked so hard and I have nothing to show (Nothing to show) I SCREAM Silently in my head I'VE NEVER FELT SO COLD (The tears I cry burn my face) My heart feels as if it has broken, But that's something I refuse to believe I know there's nothing there to break (NO HEART TO BREAK) MY LUNGS HAVE COLLAPSED I'M GASPING FOR AIR MY BODY IS STARTING TO DECAY I WISH YOU WERE HERE To catch me as I fall BUT YOU'RE NOT, You won't even hold out your hand I SCREAM Silently in my head I'VE NEVER FELT SO COLD (The tears I cry burn my face) My heart feels as if it has broken, But that's something I refuse to believe I know there's nothing there to break (NO HEART TO BREAK) I wish you would of woke me up from this nightmare...
Wow, i really really like this. It was so powerful and just breathtaking... AMAZING . Great job, love to see more, i'm left speachless. Keep writing mate, cause i want to read it.
i really like this but i think it would sound fantastic as a good, hard rocking song! it's a great write and i would love to see more of your stuff.