34 Years

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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    There once was a time, when I could say
    That every bad day was just another day
    I thought it to be true, but then it all turned around
    Hard to stay still when it's all upside down.
    I tried to keep myself calm, but it wasn't so easy
    I couldn't tell anybody anything without not pleasing
    I became a nuisance to everyone I knew
    Before I could say it, they said, "Oh, it's you."
    The mocking went up, and my life went down
    I couldn't stop everything that I heard all around
    I gave up, hoping it would all just stop
    But it never has ceased, I'm about to erupt
    I can't take it anymore, I'm not just some guy
    Who thinks that life is not real, that I should die
    I believe that there's a purpose, and that's what I stand for
    But maybe you'd understand if you could shut up a bit more
    This is a time when all we do
    Is make fun of weak people just like you
    And, we don't realize that no matter how they are
    People are saying shit about you, no matter how afar

    You think it's just a game, that they'll shake it off
    They'll look back it in 34 years, they'll scoff
    But when that kid you made fun of for what he did
    Puts the gun to his head, you'll want to take back what you said
    You don't realize that the world is changing
    People take things seriously now, it's all ranging
    From great to suicidal, it's no fucking game
    It may take just one word to make 'em bow their heads in shame
    I remember back when I was called the one
    Who should have stayed back because I was young
    And I wouldn't understand, because I wasn't cool
    They tried to convince me that I was the fool
    Well, just remember this, when you look back
    34 years from now, when life seems to be on track
    Think of all the people you loved, and those you teased
    Think of the ones you hurt, and the ones you pleased
    And maybe you'll realized the mistakes you made
    When somebody you hated dies by the tip of a blade

    This is a time when all we do
    Is make fun of weak people just like you
    And, we don't realize that no matter how they are
    People are saying shit about you, no matter how afar
    This is a time when all we need
    Is to find our differences, and help those in need
    And, maybe someday we'll find a way
    To make this world we know a better place

    Let me say one more thing, before this rhyme ends
    Let it be known, that all people want is friends
    They don't want to be hurt, want to be called the school slut
    Don't convince that they're idiots, that they want to give up
    Learn to respect a difference, and make it a plus
    Some people don't hear a compliment enough
    And maybe someday in 34 years
    There won't be as many people crying painful tears
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    This is completely beautiful. It's so true, I absolutely adore it. Thank you for writing this, it shows exactly how a lot of people feel.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    as mali did, i would like to thank you fot writing this.
    it makes a difference, such poems and lyrics.
    bless you, man.
     
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    heshboy

    heshboy Well-Known Member

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    I like this a lot. I already feel deeply sorry for the people my friends and I teased back in high school, because when you look at it now what was it all for?
    Just a laugh, but at their emotional expense.

    This makes me feel like I suck, but it's great work on your part.
     
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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    I liked it. Although a few lines seemed paired with forced rhymes, it had a great message and was written quite well. Congrats.
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    You can delete it yourself, all you have to do is click 'edit' and then 'go advanced', there should be a 'delete my post' option.

    [Edit] No problem.
     
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    esaul17

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    Sweet new forum system. Gotta love it. Thanks Mali.
     
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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    Thanks.
     
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    Snail

    Snail LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Simply put, this is beautiful, it describes almost about everything I, and I am sure many others have been through. Great work man.
     

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